Does this paragraph makes sense?!!!?

There are some misspellings and grammatical errors that threw me off. Usually, the "is" should be are or am, like here "I too is happy" should probably be "I too am happy". I see "to taken in this", I think it should be: "to have taken in this". It would also help to find some synonyms for crazy like insane or something and use that instead of repeating crazy man. Call him loon, use different words for a better grade.